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Tuesday, 30 August 2016

Kauri -Persuasive Writing Framework

Persuasive Writing Framework


Persuasive Writing Topic and Task
It is wrong to fight
What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic?
  • Write to persuade your reader of your ideas.
Think about:
  • what your reader needs to know about the topic
  • how you are going to introduce the topic the order of your ideas and how you link them what to include in your summary.




Statement
It is wrong to fight

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Introduction:
Introduce the topic by stating your opinion
It is wrong to fight.


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Reason #1
1- State your first reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
My most important reason why people shouldn't fight is because people will be dead their families will be broken hearted and very sad. Also people will get hurt and could lead them to hospital but the most important thing is that people will be sent to jail they would have a bad future and if you murder someone you will probably be sent to jail for the rest of their lives.

For example if I saw someone in a fight you will probably try stop it and then call the cops. They will be handcuffed then sent to court and they will have to talk about what they did and if it is very bad all if they started it they will be put in their for for long the judge says.
Reason #2
1- State your second reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
I think that we should not fight because you will be in very serious danger because if you hurt someone's gang member and if they find out they will start to hunt you down and it will get very serious because everybody from everyone's family will start to fight.

For example there is a gang in NZ called the Headhunters and one of the co-leader’s son went to a party and he got into a fight and someone cut him with a machete. As soon as the Headhunters crew found out that someone killed one of their members. They all were riding on their bikes and trying to find the dude who killed the headhunter guy. The found him and started to beat him up.
Reason #3
1- State your third reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
My other most important reason is that mostly in fights a lot of people carry around weapons which a very dangerous like Knifes , Guns and other sharp things. If you are every seen with a weapon you will be arrested and been answered why you will carrying around that weapon. Most people say I am carrying the weapon around because it i get into a sticky situation I can use it on people. But that is not a excuse they still go to court and get arrested. And if you are into a fight and you manage to use your weapon you get it taken off you and be sent to jail for a long time.
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Opinion
Summarise your argument by restating your opinion
I am against fighting because it should be stopped or else a lot of people will get hurt and be in jail.
We don't want to make people be in jail it is because it's not fair and also it its mostly from them taking drugs.
WALT: write persuasive writing. This is about It is wrong to fight. I hope you read it well and get what I am saying thanks very much please leave a comment on what I need to improve on thanks. :D

Thursday, 25 August 2016

Persuasive Writing Framework

Persuasive Writing Framework
It’s ok to be different



Statement
It’s ok to be different

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Introduction:
Introduce the topic by stating your opinion
I think we should all be different.


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Reason #1
1- State your first reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
I think that we all should be different because if we all were the same it will be boring. For example if everyone was angry all the time people will get frustrated and other people will start to kill. The world will end.

At school sometimes people mock each other. I find this sad because they are calling other people names and talking about their family especially parents. What if everybody did this all the time? It would lead to frustration and violence. We need good people in the world and also leaders to support us and give us a better environment.







Reason #2
1- State your second reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
It is good to be different because it's fun. It was good to visit my brother who lived in Perth. I liked to meet other people in his country.  They were kind and I also liked the environment there and also the city. It was very cool we went to the bowling zone which was extremely cool. He took us to the ferris wheel and then he took us to have dinner by the beach. It was so good to be in a different place with different people. Another xample is a Rugby Team that all have different skills.   It is when they combine their skills together to make a very good controlled team.







Reason #3
1- State your third reason
2 - Support your reason with an example
Being different makes people unique.
My Mum is a person who works very hard when she is cleaning up. She is very helpful and it keeps my house a very nice place to be. My Dad is a very hard worker too. He goes to work each day so he can earn money for my family. These people are unique and special to me. Another example is my friend Kiko. He helps me with work at school and I really appreciate it when he helps me a lot with my work.
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Opinion
Summarise your argument by restating your opinion
I strongly believe that being different is important because not everybody is the same and being ‘unique’ makes the world a better place.






What do I think about this piece of persuasive writing?
I think this is a good piece of writing Kauri, with excellent examples too support your ideas.  Well done.

WALT: write persuasive writing. This is my Persuasive Writing Frame work. We are talking about being different to each other. Hope you like it Please Comment and give feedback.