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Thursday 13 October 2016

The Intense Journey!! - Narrative Writing

The Intense Journey!!


One spooky cold day, in Florida 4 friends decided to go into the forest too have a explore. They bring stuff with them so they can protect themselves from others that decided to do something bad.
They stopped at a shop and brought a torch and some survivor stuff like water and food. They arrived the point where they are exploring. Toma says are you sure about this bro’s we say back to him yeah of course there isn't going to be anyone in there and if there is lucky we got some equipment to protect ourselves. While we are seeping through the branches and rocks, Falakiko here’s a loud scream and a little girl crying. We all stop and look at each other. But Maui and Kauri aren't afraid to go in more then…


A little girl starts running towards us and we froze because she had a little hobbit with her which was as small as a pin. Then she ran straight past us and 20 meters in front of us she was there sitting on a tree. Kauri and Maui said too the friends should we go and say hello and check what she is doing. Falakiko and Toma said no don't what if she tries to murder you’s, but Maui and Kauri didn't listen to his friends and then they walked up step by step and said “hello are you there” she wouldn't respond. 5 seconds later she stands up and screams, and then she turned into a witch. We ran for our lives, then Toma tripped over a tree branch that had fallen of the tree. Maui stopped and grabbed him. Instead of picking him up and running again Maui grabbed Toma and chucked him on his back and started running. Kauri and Falakiko slowed down for Maui to go in front because he was slower because he had Toma on his back. We ran for like 30minutes non-stop that's how scared we were. Finally Kauri looked behind him and saw that she wasn't there but that didn't make us stop running we ran until we could see light from cars, and finally we did.

The boys said I'm never going back in there, Toma saw a public person and asked if he called borrow his phone to call the police. The public person said “WHY” then Toma just took it off him and then the public person said “Hey Give It Back”. Toma rang the police and then they picked up Toma said can you please go to the forest in Florida where the ocean is they came straight away and we told them where she was chasing us from and we said she was also with a small hobbit creature but the hobbit wasn't chasing us.. They were looking for days but they couldn't find her. So they decided to make put it on the news, and it said Warning to all People out there if you live in Florida please make sure you don't go too this forest because there is a witch in there. The police blocked it off and no one was allowed to enter. When we got home we told our parents and other friends but they didn't believe us, but they did until the news came on talking about how 4 boys went into a forest and saw a witch. They were shocked and horrified. Our parents were yelling at us because we didn't tell them that we were going to the forest alone. They said don't ever do that again without permission and we said “Ok” and walked off.


The problem was solved and we got some rest and we Lived Happily Ever After and carried on with our lives until we get old.



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