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Thursday 22 October 2015

The Sun Poetry


We are learning to use Adjectives,Similes,Metaphors,Verbs

Please leave a comment what I need to improve on thanks :D

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Kauri,
I like your similes and metaphors your adjectives are so interesting keep it up.

Anonymous said...

Hi Kau Kau,
I like the way you used interesting things to write your sun poem.
Keep it up!

Anonymous said...

Hi Kauri I like the way you put in Good describing words and simils

Anonymous said...

Hi Kauri I like the way you put in Good describing words and simils

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