Kauri -Persuasive Writing Framework

Persuasive Writing Framework

Persuasive Writing Topic and Task It is wrong to fight What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic? Write to persuade your reader of your ideas. Think about: what your reader needs to know about the topic how you are going to introduce the topic the order of your ideas and how you link them what to include in your summary.

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	Statement	It is wrong to fight
O	Introduction: Introduce the topic by stating your opinion	It is wrong to fight.
R E	Reason #1 1- State your first reason 2 - Support your reason with an example	My most important reason why people shouldn't fight is because people will be dead their families will be broken hearted and very sad. Also people will get hurt and could lead them to hospital but the most important thing is that people will be sent to jail they would have a bad future and if you murder someone you will probably be sent to jail for the rest of their lives. For example if I saw someone in a fight you will probably try stop it and then call the cops. They will be handcuffed then sent to court and they will have to talk about what they did and if it is very bad all if they started it they will be put in their for for long the judge says.
	Reason #2 1- State your second reason 2 - Support your reason with an example	I think that we should not fight because you will be in very serious danger because if you hurt someone's gang member and if they find out they will start to hunt you down and it will get very serious because everybody from everyone's family will start to fight. For example there is a gang in NZ called the Headhunters and one of the co-leader’s son went to a party and he got into a fight and someone cut him with a machete. As soon as the Headhunters crew found out that someone killed one of their members. They all were riding on their bikes and trying to find the dude who killed the headhunter guy. The found him and started to beat him up.
	Reason #3 1- State your third reason 2 - Support your reason with an example	My other most important reason is that mostly in fights a lot of people carry around weapons which a very dangerous like Knifes , Guns and other sharp things. If you are every seen with a weapon you will be arrested and been answered why you will carrying around that weapon. Most people say I am carrying the weapon around because it i get into a sticky situation I can use it on people. But that is not a excuse they still go to court and get arrested. And if you are into a fight and you manage to use your weapon you get it taken off you and be sent to jail for a long time.
O	Opinion Summarise your argument by restating your opinion	I am against fighting because it should be stopped or else a lot of people will get hurt and be in jail. We don't want to make people be in jail it is because it's not fair and also it its mostly from them taking drugs.

WALT: write persuasive writing. This is about It is wrong to fight. I hope you read it well and get what I am saying thanks very much please leave a comment on what I need to improve on thanks. :D

Persuasive Writing Framework

Persuasive Writing Framework

It’s ok to be different

• Planning for persuasive writing
• Example of persuasive writing
• Sentence starter chart for persuasive writing

	Statement	It’s ok to be different
O	Introduction: Introduce the topic by stating your opinion	I think we should all be different.
R E	Reason #1 1- State your first reason 2 - Support your reason with an example	I think that we all should be different because if we all were the same it will be boring. For example if everyone was angry all the time people will get frustrated and other people will start to kill. The world will end. At school sometimes people mock each other. I find this sad because they are calling other people names and talking about their family especially parents. What if everybody did this all the time? It would lead to frustration and violence. We need good people in the world and also leaders to support us and give us a better environment.
	Reason #2 1- State your second reason 2 - Support your reason with an example	It is good to be different because it's fun. It was good to visit my brother who lived in Perth. I liked to meet other people in his country.  They were kind and I also liked the environment there and also the city. It was very cool we went to the bowling zone which was extremely cool. He took us to the ferris wheel and then he took us to have dinner by the beach. It was so good to be in a different place with different people. Another xample is a Rugby Team that all have different skills.   It is when they combine their skills together to make a very good controlled team.
	Reason #3 1- State your third reason 2 - Support your reason with an example	Being different makes people unique. My Mum is a person who works very hard when she is cleaning up. She is very helpful and it keeps my house a very nice place to be. My Dad is a very hard worker too. He goes to work each day so he can earn money for my family. These people are unique and special to me. Another example is my friend Kiko. He helps me with work at school and I really appreciate it when he helps me a lot with my work.
O	Opinion Summarise your argument by restating your opinion	I strongly believe that being different is important because not everybody is the same and being ‘unique’ makes the world a better place.

What do I think about this piece of persuasive writing?

I think this is a good piece of writing Kauri, with excellent examples too support your ideas.  Well done.

WALT: write persuasive writing. This is my Persuasive Writing Frame work. We are talking about being different to each other. Hope you like it Please Comment and give feedback.

Term 3 Week 4 - Technology Reflection

This is my Picture of my Technology refelction. We go to Tamaki College and we work with Mr Grundy. He is very kind and helpful to us. I like working on my pewter necklace and all I need to do is to check out the last finishing touch. Please leave a comment on what I need to work on thanks.

Coping with Stress - Kauri and Falakiko

Hi this is about me and my friend Falakiko we are talking about our life and what we do and our strength.
Hope you like it thanks and please leave a comment.

De - Stress Delight

WALT: talk about and solve how martin can get over his stress that he is having when he is going to do his performance or his sports.

Y - Chart - Stress

WALT: make a Y chart and talk about the three things I have listed which is Sounds Like, Looks Like and also feels Like. These are the stress things that can cause a big situation in your life.Hope you like it please comment on what I need to work thanks for viewing my work.

Small Stress and Huge Stress

WALT: talk about Small stress and Huge stress and what it can do to you and how it can effect your health and your lifestyle. Just from one thing which is Stress.
Hope you like to please comment on what I need to improve on thanks.

Information Report - Kauri An Olympic Sport

Information Report

An Olympic Sport

• INFORM
• Information Report Exemplar
• Information Report Plan

Title	Olympic Sports - Discus
Introduction: Opening Statement (no more than 3 sentences) Brief description about about the key ideas in this report.	The Sportdiscus is very old they used to play it in the ancient. They made it out of rock. The is very skinny and flat. It will be pretty hard back in the days because a lot of there stuff is mostly made out of rock and heavy metal stuff.
Paragraph One	Too play discus you have too grab a discus put it in your hand and then swing it back and throw it very far. The first game was a few years ago. It was created by the greece people. And the egypt ashens
Paragraph Two	The ancient discus was made out of stone then it moved onto bronze then off to lead or iron. It weighed 1,3 to 6,6 kg's the average weight is 2,5kg. The discusses was lighter for the boys then for the adults.
Paragraph Three	The ancient Greeks considered the rhythm and precision of an athlete throwing the discus as important as his strength. The discus was shaped like a flying saucer. The boys was not allowed too through the same weight as the men's because it will be too heavy.
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Conclusion	Discus is very cool. It is made out of Plastic , Wood , Fibreglass , Carbon fibre , metal with a metal rim and a metal core to attain the weight. A good discus too throw is 1.6kg because it is not too heavy or too light it is a perfect weight and size.  The kids that are 11 too 14 years old a good weight for them is 1kg too throw.

WALT: create a information report about a olympic sport that is in the ancient.
I have done about discus it is a very old sport and very fun to play. In the olden days it was a lot harder it was made out of stone but now it is made out of other stuff. Please leave a comment on what I need to improve on thanks. :D

Origami - by Kauri

Hi everyone this is my Origami. We got taught from one of our students in the class her name is Rosemary. Thanks for teaching us how to make a Crane. It was very hard and complicated but we did finish at the end. Please leave a comment if you think this is very cool.

What Kind of Reader am I? - Kauri

What Kind of Reader am I?
I am talking about what kind of reader am I. I like war books because they are very exciting and good to read. Please leave a comment on what is your favourite book thanks. $_$

Information Report. Aaron Orangi - The Driving Pro - Kauri

INFORMATION REPORT WRITING PLAN:

An Olympic Athlete

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• Report writing features

Title	Aaron Orangi The - Driving Pro
Introduction: Opening Statement (no more than one sentence) Brief description about about the key ideas in this report.	Aaron Orangi is a professional driver and has won many world records. He won back to back gold medals. I have choose him because he looks like a nice guy and very humble. And I have choose him because I really like cars too. Aaron Orangi was born in 1972 and grew up in Geraldine he was always a keen athlete when he was very young. He first started playing Rugby and Tennis.
Paragraph One	Dream Aaron’s dream is to be the best in the world to compete in a lot of races and to try and win them all. And if you see him racing it is very cool and exciting to watch.
Paragraph Two	Achievements Aaron has achieved his gold medals he was going for. He made it into the Olympics. And he is very good at driving he probably started to practice driving at a very young age and loved cars when he was little. And even just to be in the car he drives will be very cool because the sound of it and the look.
Paragraph Three	Goal Aaron’s goal is to come back from the olympic with a gold medal and to make everybody in his country proud of him. He wants to be very good and driving. And everybody knows he can win that gold medal for us and to make us very happy and proud of him.
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Conclusion	For me I hope he wins the gold medal I will be surprised and also the country he is representing will also be surprised. I really want him to win because he is very humble he's a nice guy and I will look forward too watch him in the olympic and you might even see him in Auckland. I wish him good luck and hope he does come home with a gold medal. I also wish him for a good future and to carry on with his wonderful life.

WALT; write about a olympic athelete that is competing in the 2016 rio olympics. I have choose Aaron Orangi because he is very good at driving fast cars and has a humble sense of humor, I also like the car that he drives which is a v8.

My Newspaper Article - by Kauri

I am learning to summarise a newspaper article!
I hope you guys like my work please leave a comment on what I need to improve of thanks.

New Vocabulary - Kauri

I am learning to use                 different comprehension skills to find the meaning of a word
We had to complete a task, we had to choose a word and then describe what it means hope you like my work. I will be doing 3 more of this to finish of all my 3 words I have written in the purple box.

3 values of a Olympic Athlete - Eric Murray

I am learning to explain how a olympic athlete has shown the 3 key values which is respect , excellence and friendship at the 2016 rio olympics.
I have created a google presentation to explain how my Olympic Athlete can show these 3 values in his life and sport. I have choosen Eric Murray because he is wonderful and has won his country a gold medal for New Zealand.

My Group Article Review - Blooms Taxonomy Current Events - The Olympics

Hi today we had to get into 4 pairs and work in a group with them. I was with Starlyn , Myself and Arohdyin. How we had to work, we each choose a slide to work on I choose Remembering , Understanding. And my other friends done the others. We didn't finish off all of it but we are going to finish it off in the week. When we finished off finishing the Bloom's Taxonomy we had to present it I will put some photos up of us presenting our work on paper. It was very cool but what we need to work on is to speak clearer and louder so our Audience can hear us. And the most important thing to do is to finish our whole work off. Because we didn't finish it. The top photo is us reading out one of our Bloom's Taxonomy slides. And the bottom photo below it is all of our work that we have completed.

FireWise - Kauri

This is my Firewise Doc.
WALT: to learn about FIre when there is and what to do please read my work to find out what will happen if there is a fire.

Kauri's Bloom's Taxonomy - Portia Woodman

BLOOM'S TAXONOMY
I have created a bloom's taxonomy it is very cool I hope you enjoy it thanks bye.